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I just wrote my first article for the magazine and would love some feedback. It's called "A Hard Day" and while it's a little long, I hope any of you who read it will enjoy and let me know what you th
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Olympia:
Do babies even think that deeply?
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
Is it possible that she feels rejected from me?
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
At bedtime she wanted my husband to read to her even though it's usually me who does that... I tried to cuddle her but she didn't want to.
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
I instantly felt awful and told her to come back and that she could nurse, she then refused.
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
I got a shock and my instinct was to just push her away, although I didn't mean to react like this.
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
Tonight when I was nursing my son and she came over and started trying to nurse from my other breast.
(5 October 2016)

Olympia:
I adopted a beautiful 1 year old girl from Indonesia 3 days ago, she's been settling in very well.
(5 October 2016)

Adaline:
I need help, potty training a girl 28 months?
(5 October 2016)

Adaline:
Hthis has been going on 6 months probably.
(5 October 2016)

Adaline:
I tried bribes, i tried letting het sit on her potty for a whole hour even when her pull hep has been dry for 3 hours, she still didnt potty.
(5 October 2016)